Tuesday, October 5, 2010

Design Critique

So I'm unsure on what to do to make this piece better so I'm leaving this up to the class. Thanks in advance for your input

1 comment:

  1. So I have a few ideas you could take or leave... Maybe not that light yellow. The boxes seem nice, and useful, but something about that color doesn't seem right. The second column of your main thing seems to be too close to the beer glass, you could drop it down since you have room. The hierarchy seems really clear, nice type choice. Overall it looks better, no awkward white space!

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